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To be honest...

I really prefer this flash to ATIO80W. It's animated :O

kinggila responds:

You mean you prefer this flash to Afro's ATWI80D? Naw.

Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D/ATIO80W > my flashes

Good work

Very good job for a first NG Submission. Most of them are worthless stick movies, but this one has shading, and relativley decent sound!
Nice job, I hope you develop your skills into something further.

Good work

I must say that the graphics and camera transitions were really smooth. Well done on that.
To make this even better, consider adding a story...and if there already was one...a story which we can understand ^_^

Look foward to seeing more by you.

Great

You should definitley consider making it into a series; and thats coming from me <<<

JohnnyUtah responds:

WELL...I'm honored sir.

P.S. "corky" is the name of a retard from a well known tv show here in the states. (just warning you)

That took you..30 mins max?

Well from what I can see, that was made like that on purpose. Now, the graphics and voice acting were reletivley good, so why not make something..good?

Corky
4/10

That was great. And I'm an asshole.

That was great. And for the person below me. No-one cares. Get over it. Hilarious.
10/10

- Corky

OK, but be realistic

Ok. I have nothing wrong with the concept. It's some of these damn annoying choices you have made.

Number 1 - The fact that the music loops WAY too many times. I don't think you realized how tedious this made the plot. It just made everything feel like 'this happened' then 'that happened' then 'this happened' and then 'that happened'. Uh..

Number 2 -The self promotional stuff. I have seen some pretty decent stuff showcased on Newgrounds before,and about 5% of the VERY best actually go on to say buy the extended version...such as Motherload. Now, you can't do that, so you go selling the resource FLA instead? Hello, it's just a bunch of motion tweens. Who would want that?? Bleh.

Number 3 - The graphics. They just weren't very...good? The style wasn't cartoony, cute or realistic, it was a mixture. Whatya call that? I don't know. It definitley wasn't Japanase. Next thing to rant on about - Sound -

The movie had no sounds! It was just the same piece of music over and over again!! Add sound so it isn't just one big flashback!

Violence - Slapping doesn't count as violence. However, I didn't need violence to still say that this wasn't bery good.

Interactivity - None, not a game.

Humour : Seeing someone get poorly slapped aint funny, especially without a cartoony sound effect.

Overall: Bad

Ummm, it was O.K.

It was OK, but a bit basic. The drawing was OK, nothing too amazing. The only hard thing which I must say you did a better than average job was the lip syncing. I dont think this deserves 3.7, I think it deserves more like a 3.

And it wasnt funny :)

Itz all good

Short and snappy, straight to the point. Good stuff.

joshuaost responds:

thanks.

Woah, Slow Down

This was 10000 times better than Act1. You REALLY must have spent HOURS, WEEKS, YEARS doing this. This is crap but i give it a 10 because Act1 was good. askjmd aojihkgrnherjngpifo r09 igre0

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