CorkySurprise's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Roboto Idioto]

Good work

Very good job for a first NG Submission. Most of them are worthless stick movies, but this one has shading, and relativley decent sound!
Nice job, I hope you develop your skills into something further.

[robot escape]

Good work

I must say that the graphics and camera transitions were really smooth. Well done on that.
To make this even better, consider adding a story...and if there already was one...a story which we can understand ^_^

Look foward to seeing more by you.

[Flash Comedy Extravaganza]

That was great. And I'm an asshole.

That was great. And for the person below me. No-one cares. Get over it. Hilarious.
10/10

- Corky

[Her and Mine 1001 Wishes]

OK, but be realistic

Ok. I have nothing wrong with the concept. It's some of these damn annoying choices you have made.

Number 1 - The fact that the music loops WAY too many times. I don't think you realized how tedious this made the plot. It just made everything feel like 'this happened' then 'that happened' then 'this happened' and then 'that happened'. Uh..

Number 2 -The self promotional stuff. I have seen some pretty decent stuff showcased on Newgrounds before,and about 5% of the VERY best actually go on to say buy the extended version...such as Motherload. Now, you can't do that, so you go selling the resource FLA instead? Hello, it's just a bunch of motion tweens. Who would want that?? Bleh.

Number 3 - The graphics. They just weren't very...good? The style wasn't cartoony, cute or realistic, it was a mixture. Whatya call that? I don't know. It definitley wasn't Japanase. Next thing to rant on about - Sound -

The movie had no sounds! It was just the same piece of music over and over again!! Add sound so it isn't just one big flashback!

Violence - Slapping doesn't count as violence. However, I didn't need violence to still say that this wasn't bery good.

Interactivity - None, not a game.

Humour : Seeing someone get poorly slapped aint funny, especially without a cartoony sound effect.

Overall: Bad

[I Hate Clowns]

Itz all good

Short and snappy, straight to the point. Good stuff.

joshuaost responds:

thanks.