To be honest...
I really prefer this flash to ATIO80W. It's animated :O
To be honest...
I really prefer this flash to ATIO80W. It's animated :O
You mean you prefer this flash to Afro's ATWI80D? Naw.
Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D/ATIO80W > my flashes
Good work
Very good job for a first NG Submission. Most of them are worthless stick movies, but this one has shading, and relativley decent sound!
Nice job, I hope you develop your skills into something further.
Good work
I must say that the graphics and camera transitions were really smooth. Well done on that.
To make this even better, consider adding a story...and if there already was one...a story which we can understand ^_^
Look foward to seeing more by you.
Great
You should definitley consider making it into a series; and thats coming from me <<<
WELL...I'm honored sir.
P.S. "corky" is the name of a retard from a well known tv show here in the states. (just warning you)
That took you..30 mins max?
Well from what I can see, that was made like that on purpose. Now, the graphics and voice acting were reletivley good, so why not make something..good?
Corky
4/10
That was great. And I'm an asshole.
That was great. And for the person below me. No-one cares. Get over it. Hilarious.
10/10
- Corky
OK, but be realistic
Ok. I have nothing wrong with the concept. It's some of these damn annoying choices you have made.
Number 1 - The fact that the music loops WAY too many times. I don't think you realized how tedious this made the plot. It just made everything feel like 'this happened' then 'that happened' then 'this happened' and then 'that happened'. Uh..
Number 2 -The self promotional stuff. I have seen some pretty decent stuff showcased on Newgrounds before,and about 5% of the VERY best actually go on to say buy the extended version...such as Motherload. Now, you can't do that, so you go selling the resource FLA instead? Hello, it's just a bunch of motion tweens. Who would want that?? Bleh.
Number 3 - The graphics. They just weren't very...good? The style wasn't cartoony, cute or realistic, it was a mixture. Whatya call that? I don't know. It definitley wasn't Japanase. Next thing to rant on about - Sound -
The movie had no sounds! It was just the same piece of music over and over again!! Add sound so it isn't just one big flashback!
Violence - Slapping doesn't count as violence. However, I didn't need violence to still say that this wasn't bery good.
Interactivity - None, not a game.
Humour : Seeing someone get poorly slapped aint funny, especially without a cartoony sound effect.
Overall: Bad
Ummm, it was O.K.
It was OK, but a bit basic. The drawing was OK, nothing too amazing. The only hard thing which I must say you did a better than average job was the lip syncing. I dont think this deserves 3.7, I think it deserves more like a 3.
And it wasnt funny :)
Itz all good
Short and snappy, straight to the point. Good stuff.
thanks.
Woah, Slow Down
This was 10000 times better than Act1. You REALLY must have spent HOURS, WEEKS, YEARS doing this. This is crap but i give it a 10 because Act1 was good. askjmd aojihkgrnherjngpifo r09 igre0
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